Index: General copy updates

1) Improve wording of introduction.
2) Update policy on non-University affiliates.
Signed-off-by: Ethan Madison <ethan@ethanmad.com>

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     University of Michigan Fencing has won the USACFC College Fencing National Championships <a href="results/2016-2017/#usacfc2017" class="alert-link">f</a><a href="results/2015-2016/#usacfc2016" class="alert-link">o</a><a href="results/2014-2015/#usacfc2015" class="alert-link">u</a><a href="results/2012-2013/#usacfc2013" class="alert-link">r</a> out of the past six years!
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-Welcome to the homepage of the University of Michigan Fencing Club!
+Welcome to the homepage of the University of Michigan Fencing team!
 We are always accepting new members.
-Become a part of one of the top club fencing teams in the United States!
+Become a part of _the_ top club fencing team in the United States!
 No experience necessary, just enthusiasm.
 
 # Who are we?
@@ -20,17 +20,13 @@ We welcome both kinds of fencers and provide both a stress-free learning environ
 
 The University of Michigan Fencing Club is a member of the Midwestern Fencing Conference (MFC).
 Our travel squad consistently places in the top five clubs in the nation and competes on par with many Division I varsity squads.
-Our travel squad competes once or twice a month at tournaments in the Midwest and further.
+Our travel squad competes once or twice a month at tournaments in the Midwest and beyond.
 All members are welcome to travel, and many first-time fencers go on to represent the university on our travel squad.
 Every fall, we host a large “newbie” tournament for beginner fencers at Michigan and other colleges.
 The club is entirely student-run, and we depend heavily on a continuing influx of new members, so join today!
 
 # Join us!
 We are always recruiting new members, regardless of experience or commitment level.
-We welcome all University of Michigan students, staff, and alumni who are either interested in learning the sport of fencing, or looking to continue their fencing training.
-New members can join at any time by either attending mass meetings in the fall semester, or simply by showing up at a practice!
-We strongly recommend workout clothing and sneakers.
-The club will provide equipment, although feel free to bring your own.
-After reading all of this, there is only one question that remains:
-
-### Are you down to fence?
+We welcome all University of Michigan students, faculty, and staff who are either interested in learning the sport of fencing, or looking to continue their fencing training.
+New members can join at any time by either attending mass meetings at the beginning of a semester, or simply by showing up at a practice!
+Please read the [Join](join/) page for more information.